Yemen-+JuliaB&Garrett

=== Yemen is surrounded by both land and water. To the east of Yemen is the country Oman the Arabian Sea to the south and the Red Sea to the west and the Saudi Arabia to the north. The population is 23 million people and its land size is 203,369 square miles. ===

=== Ethnicity is a grouping based on a common culture heritage distribution by customs language, nationality and, race. The largest ethnic group in Yemen is Arab at 98%. The remaining 2% is made up of other ethnic backgrounds. Yemen is similar to other countries in the Middle East because most people speak Arab. ===

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=== Population density is the average number of people per square mile. The countries with the largest population density in the Middle East are Egypt, Turkey, and Israel. The countries with the smallest population density in the Middle East are Iran, Lebanon, and Kuwait. The population density in Yemen is 23 thousand and the area is 203,369 square feet. I have observed that Yemen is sadly the smallest Country . ===

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=== Urbanization is the process of the formation and growth of cities. Urbin means the characterizations of a city. Urbinization is the different life experences in a city Yemen is the least urbanized country in the Middle East at 35%. ===

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Language is the vocal sound or words common to a particular nation or group of people. In Yemen the official language is Arabic. Its similar becuase all th countrys speak Arabic. Most countrys in the middle east have more then one language. Maybe Yemen only has has one language becuase no one brought a __new language__ to speak.

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===Life expescancy is the average number of years members of a population are expected to live. In Yemen the average life expectancy is 63 years old. Yeman has the lowest life expectancy out of all the countrys in the middle east. In my opinion i think 63 is a pretty good age cause your not to young, but ur not to old.===

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===Religion is the system of believing and worshiping, often a code of ethnics and a philosophy. The most commom religion in Yemen is Druze. yemen has the most Druze in the middle east. I think they have the most Druze because many people brought the religion and ever since most people religion is Druze.=== <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; font-family: Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">"Religious Dignitaries Meet Outside San Francisco Basilica During The Interreligious In Assisi." //<span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; font-family: Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 14px; vertical-align: baseline;">UPI Photo Collection //<span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; font-family: Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">. United Press International, 2010. //<span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; font-family: Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 14px; vertical-align: baseline;">Gale Student Resources In Context //<span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #333333; font-family: Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif; font-size: 14px;">. Web. 27 Mar. 2012.

There a lot of things in Yemen. Their official language is Arabic. There life expectancy is 63 years old. Lastly Yemen has the most Druze in the middle east.
I noticed that you guys didn't put the citation for the pictures. I would suggest that you do a different picture for population density so it goes more with what you talking about. I appreciate how you worded the beganning paoghaph. Your font, size, and color were all good but, i would make the font all the same exsept for the color. the picture i think is most effective is the one with languge becuse it give example of the languge. The pictue i also found confusing is the one with the man for life expansices. nice work Makayla M.

I suggest that in the second paragraph you say why it would be a hardship to live in Yemmen. In your personal observations you should add more to it than just your oppinion, you should explain it. I noticed that your urbanization paragraph is not complete. I would challenge the writer to make more complete thoughts and add specific details. I like how the font color and size are easy to read and get the message across. I also suggest going back and checking your spelling and grammer. The most effective picture is the urbanization picture. One picture that could be improved is the New York City picture because it is obviously New York so it gets a little confusing! Otherwise, Good Job! Lauren B.

After reading the peer feed back i made the folowing changes 1 I took out why it would be a hard ship to live in yemen and lauren said to explain but the paragraph was on lagwig. 2 I also added more to my urbinization paragraph. 3 The last thing i did was make the population density picture more clear. from this feedback i learnd that i shuld add more information and explane my self more I should also put pictures that make more sence.

After receiving peer feedback on my rough draft and wiki, i made the following changes: 1. I think i know why my language picture was hard to understand. So ill see if i can find a better one. Well, there's nothing else to revise really. ~JuliaB