Iraq-Jack&BrianM

Iraq is a land looked country in southwest Asia. It is bordered by Sadia Rabia to the south Iran to the east. Sriya to the north and Jordan to the west. Iraq is one of the larger countrys in the middle east.(BM)

Lanuage is the vocal sounds or words common in this nation. In Iraq the offical lanuage is Aribic. Other spoken lanugages are Kurtish, Armenian, and Assyrian. Iraq is a uniqe country because it is the only countrey in southwest Asia that speaks Assyrian. It is simular to some other coutreys because others speak Aribic to. Kurtish is also a very low spoken language in the middle east.(BM)

Litercy is the ability to read and write effictivly. The litercy rates in Iraq is 83% men and 63% for women. These are very high pecetages vs other counteys. Iraq has the highest percent for men in the middle east. Iraq has a good education and school system which is why they are so smart in comarason to other counreys in the middle east.(BM) The population density is the amout of people and the square miles in a country. For example in Iraq the population is about 25.4 million people and the area is about 171,267 miles.(BM) Popular Culture/Daily Life in Iraq." (Corel Corporation) //The Blackbirch Kid's Visual Reference of the World//. Online Ed. Blackbirch Press, 2009. Reproduced in Kids InfoBits. Detroit: Gale, 2012. http://galenet.galegroup.com/servlet/KidsInfoBits

The most practiced religon in the middle east is Islam. There is Druzelam, Shi'i, and sunni. Iraq is 55% Druze 15% Christian and the rest sunni. All the reliouns practiced are Christianity, Islam, and Judism.(JH)

The country with the highest life expectancy is Isreal and the lowest is Yemen. Iraq is about 70% All the countrys are with in 63% and 81%.(JH) Iraq is unique when compared to its nabiors in the middle east. Men have the higher life expancity than women by 15%. They practice 3 different religons just in Iraq!.(JH)

Jack, I noticed the great detailed pictures that fit perfectly. I also would suggest putting more info in like %. I would like to learn more about the 3 religon. Overall, the pictures and font were very well placed and non of them were confusing.- ryanv

Jack and Brian, i would sugest giving pictures of graphs and charts so that it is easier to understand population and stuff. I like some of the pictures you already have though. they make it easy to see what it il like in Iraq. I have noticed that you spell t a lot of words wrong. this comment was brought to you by Kevin Holt.

I would double check your spelling but your pictures match the paragraphs well. My favorite [picture was the picture of the map. I liked how you add alot of details to your paragraph......KaLEIGH

After receving peer feedback on my rough draft and wiki, I made the following three changes:

1)I went back into my Intro pharagraph and added that Iraq was one of the larger countrys in the middle east. 2)I went back in my 2nd pharagraph and added more about the 4 languages because one of my class mates said that he would like to know more about about them. I added that not that many people speak Kurtish in the middle east. 3)I went back into the text and tryed to find all of the spelling maskates that I could find I misspelt country and lauguages a couple of times.

From the reading process I learned that no matter how many times you look over your work it could always be better and that other classmates catch your mastakes most of the time for you. I made sure that I used all off the feedback that I could get so it can be as good as possible. Brian M