Iran-+Becca&MichaelC

= Iran is a country in the Middle East. It is the second largest country with 636,296 square miles. 65.8 million people live in Iran. Iran is located east of Iraq and is northwest of Saudi Arabia. (MC) =

= Ethnicity is a grouping based on commen culture heritage distingguished by customs language nationality or race. Iran etnicity is mostly Persian it is 51% Persian. It is different because it has 5 ethnicitys Arab,Kurd,Azerbaijani,Persain and Other. Iran os one of the biggest countries in the Middle East. That is why the have a lot of different ethnic groups. (MC) =

= Lauguage is the vocal sounds and words commen to a particular nation or a group if people. Iran mostly speaks Persian. I think its different because it speaks 5 different languages Persian,Turkish, Kurish, Abric and Turkic. Its different because it speaks 5 launguages. (MC) =

= Life epectancy the avrage number of years a member of a population are expected to live in Iran. Life epcetancy is 71 years. It is the 7th hightest life expetancy. so the average number of years if you live in Iran is 71 years old. (MC) = = = = = =Literacy is the ability to read and write efficiently. In Iran about 83% men can read and write efficiently. That is about normal for men in the Middle East. About 70% of women can read and write efficiently. Compared to Yemen, the women are more educated in Iran. In Yemen only 25% of women can read and write efficiently. I wondered if Yemen let women go to school.=

== "Literacy in Iran." (Illustration by XNR Productions/Cengage Learning, Gale.) //The Blackbirch Kid's Visual Reference of the World//. Online Ed. Blackbirch Press, 2009. Reproduced in Kids InfoBits. Detroit: Gale, 2012. http://galenet.galegroup.com/servlet/KidsInfoBits = = =Population density is how many people there are per square mile. Iran’s population density is 106 people per square mile. Compared to Lebanon, Iran dose not have a lot of people. Lebanon has 952 people per square mile. I was surprised when I saw that because Lebanon is one of the smallest countries and Iran is one of the biggest countries in the Middle East.= == "Map of Iran." //Junior Worldmark Encyclopedia of Foods and Recipes of the World//. 4 vols. U*X*L, 2002. Reproduced in Kids InfoBits. Detroit: Gale, 2012. http://galenet.galegroup.com/servlet/KidsInfoBits = = =Urbanization is Industry areas (cities) in a country. The Urbanized in Iranis about 93%. Compared to Yemen, Iran has a lot of urbanization.Yemen has about 33% urbanization. I wasn’t really surprised because Yemenis smaller than Iran. I think if the country is smaller it has less urbanization than the larger countries.= = = "Local Iranian families tour the mud city of Bam to learn of its history." Countries and Their Cultures. Ed. Carol R. Ember and Melvin Ember. Vol. 2. New York: Macmillan Reference USA, 2001. General OneFile. Web. 4 Apr. 2012 =Over all Iran seems like an over achieved country but in population density. What I mean by that is Iran is better than everything else. I think that because Iran is higher in everything compared to the other Middle Eastern countries. Maybe sometimes Iran isn’t higher but it seems that with most of the data that was collected it seems that it has higher in the topics researched.=

After reading this wiki and consulting the Peer Feedback Checklist on p.10, I noticed that you did have some spelling and grammar mistakes that you probably would want to edit. I would suggest that you say that Iran spoke the most language. I would challenge the writer to make a comparison to the country with the highest urbanization rate. The authors some visuals all font, space size and colors effectively to deliver the message because I thought that som eof the pictures were sort of drifting from the topic. The picture, or graph that was most effective was the one that shows that the ethnicity of Iran was Pesain, because it really was significant that the ethnicity if Persain was domonant. I think that the picture for urbanization could be iproved because it is a picture of someone praying at a mosque and that is not what urbanization is. The last thing that I noticed was that all of the pictures did not have citations. Hannah C

I noticed that you have some spelling errors. I would suggest that you go back and fix the spelling errors. I was suprised by the fact that Iran has one of the biggest life expectancy. You do use the visuals, font, space, size, and colors to diliver your message. Your urbanization picture most effective because is shows the a city. No, none of the pictures are confusing

=Thank you for giving me feedback it helped me alot. Since you both said i have to fix some of my spelling i fixed it in paragraph 4 of mine. I spell average wrong I ended up fixing that. Also you said that i should changed my fount size i changed it to a bigger size so it is easier to read.Thanks again for your feedback! -Michael C=