Israel-+Rob&Lauren

= = =__** Israel **__= = Israel is a small country **bordering the Mediterranean Sea ** in southwest Asia. It lies west of Jordan and northeast of Egypt. With 7.1 million people in 8,473 miles, Israel is a great place to live.Israel may be small in size = = but its contribution to the Middle East is big. = = = = = = = = Language is the vocal sounds or words particular to a group or nation. The official language n Israel is Hebrew, but they also speak Arabic. No other countries speak Hebrew but 8 other countries speak Arabic. I believe that some of the people in Israel traded with other counties and picked up some of their languages. (LB) = = = = = "Hebrew, Arabic, and English characters." (Blackbirch Press Photo Bank) //The Blackbirch Kid's Almanac of Geography//. Blackbirch Press, 2000. Reproduced in Kids InfoBits. Detroit: Gale, 2012. http://galenet.galegroup.com/servlet/KidsInfoBits = =

= = = = = = = GDP is the value of goods and services a country produces per person. Oil Wealth is the amount of wealth per person that comes from a country's oil resources. Israel's oil wealth is 0 but its GDP is 26,600, which is one of the highest. Israel must have very good jobs because they are getting all their money from their jobs. (LB) = = =

= = = = = = Exports of Israel." (Illustration by XNR Productions/Cengage __Learning__, Gale.) //The Blackbirch Kid's Visual Reference of the World//. Online Ed. Blackbirch Press, 2009. Reproduced in Kids InfoBits. Detroit: Gale, 2012. http://galenet.galegroup.com/servlet/KidsInfoBits = =

= Ethnicity is a grouping based on cultural heritage, distinguished by customs, language, nationality and race. The largest ethnic group in Israel is Jew. Another ethnic group in Israel is Arab. Most other countries have Arab as their largest ethnic group. In this way Israel is different but it is similar because Arab is one of their groups. I wonder if some Arab groups moved to Israel. (LB) = = =

= = = = = = "Israel: Ethnic Make-up." (Illustration by XNR Productions/Cengage __Learning__, Gale.) //The Blackbirch Kid's Visual Reference of the World//. Online Ed. Blackbirch Press, 2009. Reproduced in Kids InfoBits. Detroit: Gale, 2012. [] = =

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= = ==Religon is what you belive in. The most popular religon in Israel is Jewish. In most countries in the Middle East the main religon is Arebk. Israel is one of the only middle east countries to have a religon as its primary that is not Arebk. Jewish is very popular in Israel.(RB)== = = = = "Major Religions in Israel." (Illustration by XNR Productions/Cengage Learning, Gale.) //The Blackbirch Kid's Visual Reference of the World//. Online Ed. Blackbirch Press, 2009. Reproduced in Kids InfoBits. Detroit: Gale, 2012. http://galenet.galegroup.com/servlet/KidsInfoBits = =

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= = ==Literacy is the ability to read and write. Israel is a very literate country. The men are 98% literate and women are 93% literate, which means that Israel much have schools that teach how to read and write to make Israel a much more literate place in the Middle East.(RB)== = = = = "Literacy in Israel." (Illustration by XNR Productions/Cengage Learning, Gale.) //The Blackbirch Kid's Visual Reference of the World//. Online Ed. Blackbirch Press, 2009. Reproduced in Kids InfoBits. Detroit: Gale, 2012. http://galenet.galegroup.com/servlet/KidsInfoBits = =

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= = ==Life expectency the number of years that you will live. In the middle east people who live in Israel will live the most out of all the middle east countries at 80 years for men and for women so people in Israel are healthy so people will live longer to make Israel a good place to live a long life.(RB)== = = = = "Egyptian casket." (Blackbirch Press Photo Bank) //The Blackbirch Kid's Almanac of Geography//. Blackbirch Press, 2000. Reproduced in Kids InfoBits. Detroit: Gale, 2012. http://galenet.galegroup.com/servlet/KidsInfoBits = =

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= = ==Israel is a great place to live because of its literate rate and that it has the most life expectency out all of the middle east countries. Also it has good jobs because of its GDPand its religon on jewish would be a good religon to learn about if you move to the middle east.(RB)== = =

= = I appreciated how the author made some keen observations about the demographics in Isreal, especially in the GDP paragraph. Mrs. C. = =

= = After reading this wiki and consulting with peer feedback checklist on page 10 i seggest that you check over your work on last time to correct any spelling errors. Yes, i think you did a good job delivering your message. You had great deatil and good supporting evedence. The picture that is most effetive is the literacy one. It shows how little reading and writing they have. Yes i think you did a great job with the picture. = = ~Julia B = = After reading this wiki and consulting the peer feedback checklist on page 10 I noticed that you have good information and great details to back it up. I understood what you wrote because you wrote it in a way that was strait forward and got to the point and was really easy to under stand. One thing that i would suggest is that you would look over all your gramer and spelling one more time because i found a few mistakes. You met the requirements and had all the visuals,font,space,size and colors effectively. The pitcher that i thought was the best was the egiptchan coffin because it was more visual than the charts. I don't think that you have to change any pics i just think some might me confusing for people that are more visual but it is fine. = = Garrett H = =

= = I noticed that you made the font a nice colorso that people could see it easaly and you made it really big to. = = I think the pictcher that is the __best__ is the one showing the religon in Isreal showing that most are Jewish and other christans in the country. (kyle.s.) = =

= = I appreciated how the author put their own opinion about the subject into their paragraphs. It made me think more about why a certain religion, ethnicity, etc. belongs to Israel. I noticed that some words were spelled wrong and there wasn't a space between some words. I remembered how you had a definition of the subject you were going to talk about before you wrote anything about it. It helped me gain a better understanding of what you were writing about. I think the author used visuals, font, space, size, and colors effectively, because it looked professional, and it was easy to understand. The picture of the literacy graph was the most effective picture for me because it gave a good demonstration of how many people were literate in Israel. I think that all of the pictures were clear, and easy to understand.(MDw) = =

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After reviewing the feedback i got I made some changes in my writing
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= = = I thought that the feedback that i got was helpful but next time I want somemore feedback on places that I may need to edit or fix but I thought the process was good all together. - Rob.b = = Israel is a small country bordeirng the Mediteranian Sea in southwest Asia. It lies west of Jordan and northeast of Egypt. With 7.1 million people in 8,473 miles, Israel is a great place to live.Israel may be small in size but its contrubution to the Middle East is big. = = Language is the vocal sounds or words particular to a group or nation.The official language n Israel is Hebrew, but they also speak Arabic. No other contries speak Hebrew but 8 other countires speak Arabic. I believe that some of the people in Israel traded with other counties and picked up some of their languages.(LB) = "Hebrew, Arabic, and English characters." (Blackbirch Press Photo Bank) //The Blackbirch Kid's Almanac of Geography//. Blackbirch Press, 2000. Reproduced in Kids InfoBits. Detroit: Gale, 2012. http://galenet.galegroup.com/servlet/KidsInfoBits

= = = GDP is the value of goods and services a country produces per person. Oil Wealth is the amount of wealth per person that comes from a country's oil resources. Israel's oil wealth is 0 but it's GDP is 26,600, which is one of the highest. Israel must have very good jobs because they are getting all their money from their jobs.(LB) = Exports of Israel." (Illustration by XNR Productions/Cengage __Learning__, Gale.) //The Blackbirch Kid's Visual Reference of the World//. Online Ed. Blackbirch Press, 2009. Reproduced in Kids InfoBits. Detroit: Gale, 2012. http://galenet.galegroup.com/servlet/KidsInfoBits

= Ethnicity is a grouping based on cultural heritage, distingushed by customs, language, naationality and race. The largest ethnic group in Israel is Jew. Another ethnic group in Israel is Arab.Most other countries have Arab as their largest ethnic group. In this way Israel is diffrent but it is similar because Arab is one of their groups. I wonder if some Arab groups moved to Israel?(LB) = "Israel: Ethnic Make-up." (Illustration by XNR Productions/Cengage __Learning__, Gale.) //The Blackbirch Kid's Visual Reference of the World//. Online Ed. Blackbirch Press, 2009. Reproduced in Kids InfoBits. Detroit: Gale, 2012. []

==Religon is what you belive in. The most popular religon in Israel is Jewish. In most countries in the Middle East the main religon is Arebk. Israel is one of the only middle east countries to have a religon as its primary that is not Arebk. Jewish is very popular in Israel.(RB)== "Major Religions in Israel." (Illustration by XNR Productions/Cengage Learning, Gale.) //The Blackbirch Kid's Visual Reference of the World//. Online Ed. Blackbirch Press, 2009. Reproduced in Kids InfoBits. Detroit: Gale, 2012. http://galenet.galegroup.com/servlet/KidsInfoBits

==Literacy is the ability to read and write. Israel is a very literate country. The men are 98% literate and women are 93% literate, which means that Israel much have schools that teach how to read and write to make Israel a much more literate place in the Middle East.(RB)== "Literacy in Israel." (Illustration by XNR Productions/Cengage Learning, Gale.) //The Blackbirch Kid's Visual Reference of the World//. Online Ed. Blackbirch Press, 2009. Reproduced in Kids InfoBits. Detroit: Gale, 2012. http://galenet.galegroup.com/servlet/KidsInfoBits

==Life expectency the number of years that you will live. In the middle east people who live in Israel will live the most out of all the middle east countries at 80 years for men and for women so people in Israel are healthy so people will live longer to make Israel a good place to live a long life.(RB)== "Egyptian casket." (Blackbirch Press Photo Bank) //The Blackbirch Kid's Almanac of Geography//. Blackbirch Press, 2000. Reproduced in Kids InfoBits. Detroit: Gale, 2012. http://galenet.galegroup.com/servlet/KidsInfoBits

==Israel is a great place to live because of its literate rate and that it has the most life expectency out all of the middle east countries. Also it has good jobs because of its GDPand its religon on jewish would be a good religon to learn about if you move to the middle east.(RB)==

I appreciated how the author made some keen observations about the demographics in Isreal, especially in the GDP paragraph. Mrs. C.

After reading this wiki and consulting with peer feedback checklist on page 10 i seggest that you check over your work on last time to correct any spelling errors. Yes, i think you did a good job delivering your message. You had great deatil and good supporting evedence. The picture that is most effetive is the literacy one. It shows how little reading and writing they have. Yes i think you did a great job with the picture. ~Julia B After reading this wiki and consulting the peer feedback checklist on page 10 I noticed that you have good information and great details to back it up. I understood what you wrote because you wrote it in a way that was strait forward and got to the point and was really easy to under stand. One thing that i would suggest is that you would look over all your gramer and spelling one more time because i found a few mistakes. You met the requirements and had all the visuals,font,space,size and colors effectively. The pitcher that i thought was the best was the egiptchan coffin because it was more visual than the charts. I don't think that you have to change any pics i just think some might me confusing for people that are more visual but it is fine. Garrett H

I noticed that you made the font a nice colorso that people could see it easaly and you made it really big to. I think the pictcher that is the __best__ is the one showing the religon in Isreal showing that most are Jewish and other christans in the country. (kyle.s.)

I appreciated how the author put their own opinion about the subject into their paragraphs. It made me think more about why a certain religion, ethnicity, etc. belongs to Israel. I noticed that some words were spelled wrong and there wasn't a space between some words. I remembered how you had a definition of the subject you were going to talk about before you wrote anything about it. It helped me gain a better understanding of what you were writing about. I think the author used visuals, font, space, size, and colors effectively, because it looked professional, and it was easy to understand. The picture of the literacy graph was the most effective picture for me because it gave a good demonstration of how many people were literate in Israel. I think that all of the pictures were clear, and easy to understand.(MDw)

After reviewing the feedback i got I made some changes in my writing
= 1. i went back and tryed to fix my spelling errors. = = 2. I went back and fixed my grammer errors. = = 3. Last i added some more details to my body paragraphs. =

= I thought that the feedback that i got was helpful but next time I want somemore feedback on places that I may need to edit or fix but I thought the process was good all together. - Rob.b =

= After reviewing my feedback, I made the following changes to my wiki... = = 1. I fixed the Spelling in all four paragraphs, I copy and pasted my four paragraphs onto Word and corrected the speeling. = = 2. I fixed the grammar mistakes the same way I fixed the spelling mistakes. = = 3. I fixed the format because I didn't indent before. = = I learned that I have to go back and re-read my writing for any spelling or grammar mistakes. = I f