Kuwait-+Jackie


 * 1) Kuwait is a country in the Middle East that is bordered by Saudi Arabia to the south, Iraq to the north-west and the Persian Gulf to the east. Only 2.5 million people populate Kuwait's 6,880 square miles. Kuwait is a small, but rich and urbanized country
 * 2) [[image:parker7thsoc-2011-2012/map.jpg width="277" height="360"]] Kuwait." (Blackbirch Press Archives) The Blackbirch Kid's Visual Reference of the World. Online Ed. Blackbirch Press, 2009. Reproduced in Kids InfoBits. Detroit: Gale, 2012. []
 * 3) Language is the vocal sounds common to a particular nation or group of people. Kuwait's primary language is Arabic. English is the only other language spoken. Kuwait is one of the many countries in south west Asia that have Arabic as a primary language. Kuwait must get a lot of tourists that speak English because some of the natives can speak English and would be able to communicate.
 * 4) [[image:parker7thsoc-2011-2012/Language.jpg width="223" height="292"]] "Hebrew, Arabic, and English characters." (Blackbirch Press Photo Bank) The Blackbirch Kid's Almanac of Geography. Blackbirch Press, 2000. Reproduced in Kids InfoBits. Detroit: Gale, 2012. []
 * 5) Literacy is the ability to peak and write effectively. In Kuwait 95% of the men are literate and 90% of the women are too. These literacy rates are considered veryhigh compared to the ones in other countries. In Yemen only 70% of the men are literate. Perhaps in Kuwait the leaders believe that everyone should be educated. The percent of women that are literate is shockingly high.
 * 6) [[image:parker7thsoc-2011-2012/literacy.jpg width="198" height="268"]] Kuwait." (Blackbirch Press Archives) The Blackbirch Kid's Visual Reference of the World. Online Ed. Blackbirch Press, 2009. Reproduced in Kids InfoBits. Detroit: Gale, 2012. []
 * 7) Kuwait is a mixed bag. You can't tell what your gonna get until you get it. The culture is similar to most countries, but the quality of life seems a lot better than in most countries. Kuwait's primary language, largest ethnic group, and most common religion are the same in comparison to most other countries. Although Kuwait is also very rich and well educated. Kuwait's oil wealth per capita is $15,247 while Turkey's oil wealth is $0. Kuwaitis located on the coast so maybe they get their oil supplies from the Persian Gulf. Overall, Kuwait is somewhere in the middle when it comes to similarities and differences.
 * 8) [[image:parker7thsoc-2011-2012/Flag.jpg width="289" height="172"]] Kuwait." (Junior Worldmark Encyclopedia of the Nations) The Blackbirch Kid's Visual Reference of the World. Online Ed. Blackbirch Press, 2009. Reproduced in Kids InfoBits. Detroit: Gale, 2012. []
 * 9) I noticed in you body paragraph you didn't have any spelling mistakes or capitilazition mistakes. I would sugest that you add the sorce sitations to your pictures so the readder will know where you got your pictures from. I was suprized by hon many people in Kuwait are literate.Your font, space, size, and color are all correcet nice job but, i suddest to make the font a color. The picturs were all very good but the one that stud out tpo me was the literce because it goes very nice with literce. All the pictures go very good with all the thing.
 * 10) great work
 * 11) Makayla M.
 * 12) I noticed that in the introduction you gave a very good general description of the country. I didn't notice any spelling errors. I would suggest that you add the source citations into the body paragraphs. I understood the first picture the best and it was most clear for me. Each of the body paragraphs included a definition of the demographic. I would suggest that you edit some of your spelling errors. The conclusion includes whether the country is similar or different to other countries,and what the similarities and differences are. The conclusion doesn't include a concluding paragraph. Overall I think you did a good job. Katie M.
 * 1) I noticed that in the introduction you gave a very good general description of the country. I didn't notice any spelling errors. I would suggest that you add the source citations into the body paragraphs. I understood the first picture the best and it was most clear for me. Each of the body paragraphs included a definition of the demographic. I would suggest that you edit some of your spelling errors. The conclusion includes whether the country is similar or different to other countries,and what the similarities and differences are. The conclusion doesn't include a concluding paragraph. Overall I think you did a good job. Katie M.
 * 1) I noticed that in the introduction you gave a very good general description of the country. I didn't notice any spelling errors. I would suggest that you add the source citations into the body paragraphs. I understood the first picture the best and it was most clear for me. Each of the body paragraphs included a definition of the demographic. I would suggest that you edit some of your spelling errors. The conclusion includes whether the country is similar or different to other countries,and what the similarities and differences are. The conclusion doesn't include a concluding paragraph. Overall I think you did a good job. Katie M.

After receiving peer feedback I made the following three changes: 1. I made the source citations a part of my paragraphs instead of having them as the captions. 2. I fixed all of the spelling mistakes that I made. There were more than I expected. I aslo fixed some of the grammar mistakes I had such as in my second paragraph the third sentence was a little confusing so I reworded it so that it would make more sense. 3. I added a little bit more of a conclusion to my conclusion paragraph. I made it so that is was less comparisons and more comcluding. After receiving peer feedback and editing my wiki i realized that other people that read my work are going to be able to see what I di wrong, even if I can't. I also realized that sometimes things sound better in my head than when they are actually in a peice of writing. Overall, I find it really helpful to be able to have other people's insight on what I wrote. JACKIE LE R M ON D

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