Egypt-+AliB&Jamie


 * Egypt is a rural, sub-urban country in the Middle East. It is borderd by Jordan to the east, Sudan to the south, and the Mediterranean Sea to the north. With a population of 88 __million__ people and a square mileage of 386,198, the country itself is truly magnificent. (AB) **

**Language is the vocal sounds and words that are most common to a particular nation or group of people. Egypt's most common language is Arabic because most people in Egypt are Muslim. This language compares to other countries because a few other countires __speak Arabic__, but don't speak as much as Egypt does. So now, most of Egypt must __speak Arabic__ because of the growth of the population. (AB)**



**Life expecatancy is the average number of years members of a population are expected to live. In Egypt, the approximate life expectancy is 72 years for both men and women. The life expectancy compares to the life expectancies in other Middle East countires because, the average expectancy in Egypt is in between. Which means that since the life expectancy of Egypt is 72, it's not the highest or lowest life expectancy, it's just the average compared to other countries. Today in Egypt, the life expectancy might stay the same depending on the population and the health of the people. (AB)**



**Literacy is the ability to read and write effectively. The approximate literacy rate in Egypt is 82 percent. Women are approximately 58 percent literate and men have a higher percentage rate of literacy. The literacy rates in Egypt compares to the literacy rates in other countries by the amount between each other. For example, one country might have a really high literacy rate like 90 percent, and another country might have a really low percentage of literacy like 20 percent. So therefore, Egypt has a middle literacy rate compared to the literacy rates in other countries.**
 * Now, the literacy rate in Egypt is probally higher because of the bad economy in the world, and people in the Middle East are probally trying to get an education so that they can get a good __ job __ . (AB) **


 * Population density is the amount of people per square mile. In Egypt the total population is 88 __million__ people, there are 386,198 square miles and 200 people for every square mile. Egypt's population is very unique because it is the largest population in the Middle East. Though it does have the biggest population, the area and the population density is a lot like the other countries in the Middle East. Some countries that have similar areas are Yemen (203,369 square miles), Turkey (300,947 square miles) and Iraq (171,267 square miles.) Egypt might have a smaller population density than countries like Lebanon or Israel because Egypt has larger land so that people can spread out more. (JC)**




 * Religion is a system of beliefs and worships, often involving a code of ethics and a philosophy. In Egypt, the main religon that is practiced is Islam/ Muslim (Sunni.) This is much like other countries because Islam/Muslim (Sunni) is practiced the most throughout the Middle East with all of the countries practicing it. Also, another religion that is practiced in Egypt is Christianity/ Christian. Only Israel, Iraq and Lebanon practice Christianity/ Christian in their countries . ( JC)**

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 * Urbanization is industrialized areas in a country. Eygpt is only 44%-45% urbanized. Eygpt is the second to last most urbanized in all of the middle east. This is because most of Egypt is dry deserts and holds on of the old ancient wonders of the worlds so nowbody wants to destroy those. Some countries that are close to Eygpt urbanization wise is Yemen with 33%-34% and Turkey with 58%-59%. The highest countries Iran and Kuwait are more urbanized to Eygpt by 50%. (JC)**


 * Egypt is very diverse when it comes to their demographics. Some demographic values in Eygpt are very much alike from the other countries because they are high in percent like ethnicity,language and religion. But some demograpic values in Eygpt are very much alike from the other countries because they are low in percent like urbanization, population density and oil weath per capita. Overall, Egypt is unique in many ways.(JC)**

**I don't think any of these picture were confusing. I think the most helpful ones were the graphs on religion and literacy. I think there were only two parts that was confusing was the second paragraph on language. If I were you Ali, I would change "Language which is the...." to "Language is the...." Then in the fourth paragraph which is about literacy, it gets confusing. Especially in the first couple sentences. Also not all of the paragraphs have a picture or a opinion. But, nice job other wise. -Sarah D.**

**I would suggest that the authors went back and added source citations for the pictures. I like how Ali gave her opinions, but Jamie could add some more(:. I was confused by some sentences because of the incorrect spelling and grammar. I like how Jamie worded the conclusion; i can really see the similarities and differences between Egypt and other parts of the middle east. I really like the picture of the pyramid, because it shows the historical part of Egypt. Great job girls!!! -kylie B.**

From the feedback process, i learned that some of the pictures needed source citations, also that there were some things misspelled. Another thing I noticed from the feedback is that some words were confusing people, so i changed language which is, to language is the vocal sounds and words that are common to a particular nation or group of people. Lastly, i learned that some details in the literacy paragraph was confusing so I. changed: so therefore, Egypt has an in between literacy rate compared to other countries, to so therefore, Egypt has a middle literacy rate compared to other countries.(Ali B.)