Iran-+Kristen&Sydney

= = = Iran is a big country. Iran is 636,296 square miles. North of iran is the caspian sea, and south of Iran is the Persian Gulf and the Arabian Sea. there are 65.8 million people in Iran. = = = = Language is the vocal sounds and words common to a particular nation or group of people. The most common language in Iran is Persian. No other countries speak Persian. I think that its very unique. Iran was once Persia so i think that's why they speak Persian. =

= Literacy is the ability to read and write reflectivity. In Iran 87% of men are more illiterate and 70% of women are literate. Iran has more literacy than most countries. I think that men have more literacy then women because more men have education. =

= Religion is the beliefs and worship of a group of people. In Iran the main religion is shi'i. I think this is unique, because not many people speak it in the world. = = **Ethnicity is a group based on a common cultural heritage distinguished by customs, languages, nationality or race. In Iran the most common ethnicity is Persian. It is the only country were Persia is the most common ethnic group. This is because Iran is where Persia used to be just renamed.(kr)** = "Iran: Ethnic Make-up." (Illustration by XNR Productions/Cengage __Learning__, Gale.) //The Blackbirch Kid's Visual Reference of the World//. Online Ed. Blackbirch Press, 2009. Reproduced in Kids InfoBits. Detroit: Gale, 2012. [] == = **Life expectancy is the number of years expected to live. The life expectancy is 71 years. in all the other countries the life expectancy is at least 75 years. It is the third lowest in the middle east. This might be because so many people live there living quality isn't great.(kr)** = = = "Iran's Experts Assembly Meets In Tehran." //UPI Photo Collection//. United Press International, 2010. //Gale Student Resources In Context//. Web. 26 Mar. 2012. = **Population density is the amount of people per square mile. In Iran the population density is 106 people per square mile. Iran has the second highest population of all the countries. Its area is 636,296 square miles making its population 65.8 million people. It might be a little overcrowded in Iran.(kr)** = = = "Friday Prayer In Tehran, Iran." //UPI Photo Collection//. United Press International, 2010. //Gale Student Resources In Context//. Web. 26 Mar. 2012. = **Iran is unique. Everything is higher than most other countries except for life expectancy which is third lowest in the middle east. They are Persian when most of Arabic ethnicity. Iran seems good to live in.(kr)** = = = = =

= = = I was confused about how you said 87% are more literate, because you never said what they were more literate about. Also, i appreciated how you guys made the efforts to make some of your pictures go with the paragraphs you wrote. i would suggest that you go back and check some of your paragraphs because some had some spelling mistakes or you didn't write a personal observation. The fonts were nice because they were big and the color makes your paragraphs easier to look at. The pictures that were there were very nice especially the graphs because they helped my understand what you were saying more. Overall, both of you did a very nice job! AB = = = = = = I like that you guys told the percent of men and women who are aliterate. I noiticed that you guys didn't have alot of information on some of your topics. I would suggest tha you guys look for more details. I was confused on the 87% of men who were more literate then women. I liked the font ecause it is readable. I al like the color of thefont that you used. i wasn't really that confused on alot of thing. Also i liked how you had all of your pictures posted on your wiki. I like how you gave good directions were Iran is located. The graphs really helped show the = = literacy and ethnicty. I think that you both did a great job on your wiki. I.L. =

= I think your writing is good over all but I would suggest that you at more some parisons, I noticed that not every paragraph had a comparison between the country's in the Middle East. I noticed that you had good opinions. But I do suggest that you add more detail.The author does use the visuals, font, space, size, and colors effectively to deliver her message. The font, size, and color is very readable. Also all the pictures are very effective. I think the picture for ethnicity was the most effective, it is easy to see all the different ethnicity. The literacy picture is a little confusing, You said in the paragraph the literacy was 87% of men and 70% of women but the graph shows 77%. (E G) :) = = = = = = = = After receiving peer feedback on my rough draft and wiki. I made the following three changes: = = 1) I added more detail to life expectancy. = = 2)) I added a personal opinon to population density. = = 3) I fixed the spacing. = =From the feedback process i learned that sometimes you won't realize if you dont have enough info until someone points it out. Kristen Rienzo= = =